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©2009 *Adah-nue
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One of my latest attempts to master composition.

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:iconmonkeywheel:
I think that the overall balance of the photo is good, and it appears at first glance to be a street shot. I think centralising the model looks good, and the crop neither draws attention to her, nor does it detract. She seems to be part of the photo, not the main focus.

I also think the lines created by the scenery make for an interesting shot, especially the banister in the bottom right of the photograph. When I first saw this photo in a thumbnail view I noticed that and it interested me and drew me to the photo.

One thing I do dislike though is how the shot isn't quite square, and your horizontal lines are about 5/10 degrees off of level. Personally this really bugs me, but others probably wouldn't notice.
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:iconbuddha-dreams:
I have really enjoyed the way this has been captured, As the tone's with the backround, Makes the girl stand out even more so. A great pose and greatly taken well done and keep the work up!!!
:iconadah-nue:
Thank you so much, I am glad you like it :D
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May 10
1.7 MB
155 KB
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
10/2000 second
F/6.3
38 mm
1000
Apr 21, 2009, 5:41:31 PM

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